Hi!

This is a really wonderful piece; the softness of the image is very appealing to the eye, and the brightness is a very alluring addition.

I love the color choices for her, it creates a soft impact that reflects her personality. I also like the color choices for the lion thing, it seems fierce, but also soft spoken.

Technically, I think the mouth and the wings could have been better. The wings, one, because it is like the first thing the eye is attracted to, and it should have some more robust features. The mouth, although correctly colored, is Miss-shaped. However, I do must enjoy the quaintness of the hands and elbows, its very eloquent for her.

As for impact, overall the picture seems perhaps a little too quiet to me. I think you could have added extra contrast to the image, and perhaps did a slightly-opaque violet filter on the image to enhance it.

I dont think its particularly daring, the image, but you get extra bownie points for the flowers and the lion. I think those are my two favorite parts - other than that, I think its a wonderful effort.

You have such amazingly beautiful work, it's hard to critique you.

I think the only thing you need to work on is her mouth. It creates an awkward expression, like she's in the middle of shouting a word. Fine if she's supposed to be, but we have no back story in the comments to know that.

There are a few coloring details, like the highlights on Sakura's wing on the right (white in pink shading). The white streaks seem random, rather than looking like a glow or reflection of light the other wings. They might be better blended in the same way you do lights and shadows on everything else.

That's all I really see. This piece blows me away. I especially love your coloring skills, and depth of focus effect with the flowers. Your drawing is so active, it's just as good as a screen shot, or photograph. Nice hold on Kero's ear XD.